Panel 1 of this page is meant to be an action sequence where the character is moving from one pose to the next (so this is all happening in a very brief frame of time. The character is spinning, rolling the sword over her head and around to complete the cleaving motion in Panel 2.
Tuesday, February 6, 2018
Tuesday, January 30, 2018
Wednesday, January 24, 2018
Thursday, January 18, 2018
I wanted to go through this last night but we had so many pages to get to that I figured I'd just post it up here.
So when I was saying keep the camera angles simpler this is what I meant.
I also added panels-- because I feel like the pacing in the original page is too rushed, give us some time as a reader-- give us more elements.
Panel 1- Camera is on our couple as they walk through crowds of other people.
Panel 2- Camera is pulled back, couple continues to walk-- we've got a truck moving behind them, "straights" walking towards them so that the dialogue relates to the scene.
Panel 3- They approach the encampment-- silent panel.
Panel 4- Closeup on our couple as they walk through the camp-- still silent.
Panel 5 - using the panel Babs already had, our couple walking through the camp and the camera is behind them.
Panel 6-- Our couple is now sitting on the ground and doing their drug stuff.
Wednesday, January 17, 2018
Tuesday, January 16, 2018
I had a little bit of a fail this week. Totally missed the fact that we were supposed to have TWO characters, so this one only has one. Fail. Anyways, these pages develop the knight character picking up a massive great sword and delving into a thick swamp.