Tried to give the characters so more emotive poses to convey their actions/behaviors in the story. Also tried to take into account the suggested edits for my last sketches when I did these.
Just wanted to put this one back up with the corrected pose (fixed the positioning on her front leg to a more natural position)
Put the before sketch on the right and the after sketch on the left (total unintuitive, sorry). Making the hair black and adding more folds/wrinkles to the shirt made a huge difference.