Monday, May 2, 2016

Latest 3 pages, Would love some feedback!

Hey Guys,

I'd love some feedback on the last 3 pages of The Tales of Reverie if you get a chance. How's the pacing from one page to the next? And actually, can you read the type? I noticed the pages aren't blowing up for me and the type is hard to read. Thanks, see you in class!